Great song, except for the vocals. Sorry, but they were a little too sharp and they didn't seem to fit in with the music. I took off 1.5 stars because of the vocals. Without the vocals i would give a 4.5! Good job!
Great song, except for the vocals. Sorry, but they were a little too sharp and they didn't seem to fit in with the music. I took off 1.5 stars because of the vocals. Without the vocals i would give a 4.5! Good job!
I am inclined to disagree. Not about the vocals being too sharp (most industrial singers don't match the melody near where I did-- see Combichrist), but without the lyrics I feel it was just too empty to really call a good track.
Thank you for your criticisms, though. Hopefully you like my singing better in some of the upcoming tracks in the album!
I feel at the 1:00, the drop was a biiiiit too much, but anyway. Who likes this stuff? ME!!!!
I am a very different kind of artist...I have many traits. Some of them being that i am a writer, and a slight musician. I dabble in animation every now and then. Right now i am pretty much a nobody, but i hope i can help other people become known on NG.
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Joined on 7/28/14