Sorry, this is just me, but i feel like the whole song should have just skipped to 1:21. The first minute and twent-one seconds is just three items and isn't going to keep anyone around for a while. You also made an about 5-7 second loop for the melody. That went through the whole song, and could have changed alot. The ending was a nice touch, as it slowed down.
Melody:
Needs another melody to accompany
The ambiance is good, and should stay
The melody needs to change somewhere
Drums:
The drums were perfect!
Perfect volume
Good beat
In the background enough to be repetitive through the whole song
All in all, 3.5/5